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Allan

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PostSubject: Frica [ poem]   Tue Sep 08, 2009 3:48 am

Un lucru infiorator.
Mi se furiseaza`n dormitor
Un schelet ma pazeste..
Ceva ma urmareste..

Si e un lucru ingrozitor..
Atat de infiorator
Si eu chiar m-am shcimbat
Intr-o umbra m-am transformat

Am inchis ochii si am adormit
Frigul a venit si el un pic
Mi de umbre ma cauta
In intuneric stau plina de frica

Oh Doamne ce mo fi apucat?! :]]..
Btw,astept critici dure Razz
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PostSubject: Re: Frica [ poem]   Tue Sep 08, 2009 4:26 am

ehe...acum sa incep eu ;]]..hmm greselile de tastare sunt minore,poezia imi place,are rima,e cam morbida[parerea mea] da' imi palce..gambate si astept altele si lasa ca e bine daca ai inspiratie:>
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PostSubject: Re: Frica [ poem]   Tue Sep 08, 2009 4:29 am

yea .. planul meu a reusit \;d/ .. vruiam eu sa para asa .. muribunda =)))) weh thx ca ai trecut p-acilea ;]]
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PostSubject: Re: Frica [ poem]   Tue Sep 08, 2009 6:35 am

hehe, acum sa apar si eu ;]] well, destul de draguta [yeah, macar tu folosesti rime :]]] anyway, greseli de tastare minore, se vede ca ai incercat sa treci pe morbid, si ti'a reusit...

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